Justin, you have made a very good choice to anylize, but remember that for this essay we need to write details about your firebird. On your first page you are just writing history about the car which is no ta bad thing but you know you need to focus on the designing part, think about the objectives of the manufacturer. why did they manufacture the car? in other words, what was the propose of the manufacturer? do you think that a certain group of people would by that model? why them? is that a men or women's car? why? can aged people drive it? why?
Your paper was very good,and I can understand why you have no concerns, but it would benefit you more to include the buyers/intended audience and more detail on the design and values. Make sure to address the reason these people find the Firebird desirable.
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Justin,
you have made a very good choice to anylize, but remember that for this essay we need to write details about your firebird. On your first page you are just writing history about the car which is no ta bad thing but you know you need to focus on the designing part, think about the objectives of the manufacturer. why did they manufacture the car? in other words, what was the propose of the manufacturer? do you think that a certain group of people would by that model? why them? is that a men or women's car? why?
can aged people drive it? why?
Your paper was very good,and I can understand why you have no concerns, but it would benefit you more to include the buyers/intended audience and more detail on the design and values. Make sure to address the reason these people find the Firebird desirable.
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